StormyHotWolf88's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Negative 001 - The Call]

meh

;.;! please do a series for this! or at least a link to the comic :D it was well drawn

[Walter Joyce]

So..

He killed him? He was meant to kill him?

Masquatto responds:

That's the implication, yes.

[I Am Dateowulf]

I. AM. BEOWULF

BWAHAHHAHA!!! Nice use of the sound clips even though it was awfully muffled .

[Werewolf Transformation]

Not bad

I mean it's not the greatest but some of the animation like the growing muzzle, the claws and tail was pretty good. i didn't have too much a problem with the tail cause the fur does have to grow and the tail is just a spine. (referring to an older review) I wouldn't really have agreed with the DBZ like start but that's your take on it. And yes, in the beginning the head does get smaller when you have him looking down. You loose volume in the skull and don't dip his head far down enough which gives the illusion of a suddenly longer neck. That's all the person was saying from before. Though I was wondering... That last shot of the werewolf, was that a tracing of another picture? I just recognize that pose from another werewolf artist.

Dead2Animations responds:

Hey nice review it helped me alot you make alot of sence, and the last drawing of the wolf wasnt traced I was trying to make it look like he was facing screen o_O but yea i can see that there would probably be a picture some what like that

[Lady on the railroad]

O_o

.... <.<.... >.>.... ohhh shiit HAHAHA That's HORRIBLE! Oh god X.x; I.. wow... Ohh man I.. just... don't know what to say XD! OH GOD MY MIND! THE THOUGHT! there must be blood ALL OVER his bed!
For some reason, I could careless about the quality since it's obviously not a large factor of this.
hahah... fuck... dude I'm awestruck with the image in my head.

[How 2 Succeed on NG]

Great X3

Lol, you got my 10 and 5. I only qualify on the animator part X3 yet I'm not big on flash yet. (I really should..... lol) I liked that you used the same mouths for every character lol.. it bothered me a bit on the anime guy, but it's really really not that important lol. But yeah dude. I hear you about the little to no effort problem. I've stopped doing early judgment pretty early cause I couldn't take all the crap that came in lol.. But I gotta admit, when something good comes up, it's great. After (I guess over 10 years?) People are starting to get really good at it. Glad to see :3

DBZ over played.

Though some Game parodies ARE indeed really funny. Yours made me chuckle :3

[The Gem of Power Retell]

Yeah.. No

Made no sense, couldn't understand what was being said, acting was... blah.. just... No.. at least it was colored.

IZSBHR responds:

Yeah.. No

[[2007] REBOOT 9]

Alright

Ok, I've watched the entire thing since I didn't understand it at first, I took a couple days to watch all of the episodes. Yet there were a couple plot holes in this episode. Like: Why did that guy have a karaoke revolution moment to reboot the system? Was he the Norton Anti-virus program 'rewriting' and trying to fix the system that Singing is their way of writing code? And I'm surprised that The green girl started fighting the magenta girl like that. They barely know each other and the green girl barely took time to figure out what had happened. I mean, The magenta girl was JUST resurrected a few minutes ago (knowing that the entire happenings from about ep6 and on happen within 2 hours of each other) and they are already at each other's throats. Perhaps they could rub each other the wrong way... but there was almost no build up to the tension. I'm not going to say much about the comment from Magenta to Green about her trying to commit suicide... i actually don't remember that occurance and I'm sure Magenta's knowledge on that will be touched upon later on.
Story wise, it lacks character building. I know it's in there, but I still don't feel I know who these characters are. ya know what I mean? Things are happening just too fast.
Animation wise, You are getting there. Mostly need some fine tuning of your style and movement of the bodies. (Recommend the Book: Animators survival Kit) You have an excellent sense of compostition, Lipsync needs work. (Even if you have limited animation in the mouth, at least make sure the mouth doesn't start talking a few frames before the sound starts. It is recommended to have the sound start 1 frame after the mouth moves.) I love the 3D effects and some of your follow throughs. OH! and Your expressions are awfully stiff. They are almost... not alive... ya know? Blinking eyes help when your characters aren't moving, whether the camera is moving past them or not. Spend time on your eyes as that is mostly what the audience is looking at :3

I give this a 7 because even though there is a lot of potential, there is still a lot of work to be done to improve it. I think you have something great on your hands :3 Good luck!